Monday, October 5, 2009

I thought I wasn't going to...

I just started rewriting chapter 1...exactly what I said I wasn't going to do.  Well, I felt that it needed a little work and a lot more action.  The basic elements of the first three chapters will be the same but I removed two characters and started in the middle of a new scene.  Although it isn't clear if this is any better, I feel like it may work better in the long run.

I'm going to keep cracking on this draft until I figure out if it is going to work or if I'm just going to end up going back to the old version.  We'll see!
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  1. Kristine BeavesOctober 6, 2009 at 10:26 AM

    I'm commenting on my own blog...I should at least say that I'm not entirely rewriting the chapters, just revising drastically.

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